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Matsuke
Joined: Dec 05, 2011
Post count:3352
Posted: Jun 19, 2012 12:18 PM

Thist face, this smile, all a lie
Cut it off
How I am, it's an act
Cut it out
My heart, not whole
It's cut in half
Cold, broken, tied together
Cut it free

But I have to concentrate on my work.
I carry scissors in one hand.
The scissors are now painted red.
The more you sharpen it, the better it cuts.
GrotesqueVanity
Joined: Jul 11, 2011
Post count:4241
Posted: Jun 21, 2012 03:13 PM

Poetry needs rhythm
It wants metaphors and similes
and all those other little techniques.

What you have here is a list of broken thoughts.
Expand it.
water off a ducks back.
Mini-Jen
Joined: Mar 24, 2012
Post count:2834
Posted: Jun 24, 2012 05:02 PM

i liked it

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